What do you think of these character names?

For D&D, it might be acceptable. For a story, you didn't just cross the border into Mary Sue territory - you charged in and took over the kingdom. Seriously, if you met someone in real life who introduced themselves as Lorelei Seraphina Lenore-Wolfram and had multicoloured unnatural hair, a tattoo on their face, loved animals, didn't obey instructions and claimed she was telepathic, you would think they were nuts, or at the very least a pretentious moron.